Dive Disco

No more disco dancing...no boppin' that's for sure 
I tried to do it late last night ended mangled on the floor 
The legs they went all wobbly, me head it still feels numb 
I've been stuck here since 3 o'clock, in agony on me bum 
I know Travolta did it and boy did he look nifty 
But I should really give it up as I am way past fifty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 8:57 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 2:08 AM
noura ahmed, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 7, 2015 at 1:22 PM
HI, noura ahmed, this is a wonderful write. Enjoyed dropping by to read. Love SKAT
Brown Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 8:01 AM
I truly enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Noura. I hope you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
Gould Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 11:33 AM
This made me chuckle, thank you for sharing
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