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Disturbing the Pen

DISTURBING THE PEN

what creeps
in?

insanity of sorts,

leaking
in,

instead of out.

it dribbles
out,

like drool or frothing foam.

it comes
from

the inner sanctum,

barely a
stream,

scissors snip away at contentions,

invention of
hate.

bitterness and cacophony invades.

you toss and turn,
laughing.

like a crazy fool, do not turn over

and look at
the underside.

drip, drop, drip,
on the roof of
your head.

clear your mind and begin again,

putting pen to
paper,

even bend and fly that plane.

ramblings are...
just that.

Conjure up a complete thought.

i see you hiding in the
corner,

cobwebs like sticky curtains.

madness laughs
uproariously.

how insane you look when humor beds your pen.

friction of match
complains,

as a scintilla of flame recognizes your waning brain.

9/20/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 4:22 PM
This cool, butterfly lilting poem took my cares away, Kim. I ooh and aah throughout reading it. Ty for such a creative journey thru your disturbed pen's mind. It was a poet's joy to read. Love and smiles.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Thanks, Freddie!
Melugin Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Kim, you wrote this one to the moon as poetic excellence becomes the winner of several wrestling matches with Rocky Muse....and the winner is KIM! My best to you, chuck
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:29 PM
LOL
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Deep in thought--well executed poem, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Thanks, Vijay'
Gentile Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Sounds like a regular occurrence and a familiar feeling! Nice Job xxxooo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Thanks!
Cozart Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 9:03 AM
This is charming! I especially love, "cobwebs like sticky curtains". And to think all this time my pen has been drooling!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 12:18 PM
LOL!
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