Disturbed Shadows

DISTURBED SHADOWS
Blinds closed. Dank darkness. A scintilla of frosted sunshine on a cloudy day. Dim lamplight. A doleful chirp. Quiescent but not in a peaceful way. Disturbed shadows of monotone.
the birds and bees hide in dog days darkness - rainfall
The fan wobbles and whorls. A placid flag on summer’s porch. Wet bark with leaves prepares to spawn fall colors. But changes have downtime ~ blue-gray shifts.
the shifting seasons of still oak leaves - gray-blue beard of clouds 8/11/2017
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Kimathi Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:20 AM
Beautiful imagery!! Congrats Kim, for your well-deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Teddy!
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Thank you for your fine entry! Light & Love
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Thanks so much! Blessings, Debbie!
Callus Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 1:34 PM
You paint with swift strong strokes of your poetic brushes, Kim...vivid imagery! Congratulations on this podium win. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thanks, Paul!
Wood Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations on your win Kim! Beautiful write!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Dean!
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Enjoyed reading your Haibun, Kim, congratulations on your win : ) ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Stars Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 8:12 AM
uhm ... wow ... this is a distrbing piece very eerily woven .... your choice phrases and just how you sculpted this whole piece out ... ''disturbed shadows'' ... indeed ... favorite piece i have read to date on this site ... thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts ...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Thanks so much!
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 11:41 PM
Hi Kim, a beautiful haibun. I especially liked the last line of your second haiku. Great imagery!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:44 PM
Good view on changing season depicted in your work, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Thanks Vijay!
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