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Disturbed Creature- Am I

A poem wrote by me, based on Person who is a deserving icon but still struggling hard with his career life and addressed as disturbed creature.

DISTURBED CREATURE--> Am I ??       BY Mrs.Madhavi 

Am I so insane, Am I so mad,
Dramatic mood of mine is so die hard.
Destroyed my peace, Shattering my dreams,
People call me as disturbed creature.
As like mounting the pain, attenuating the drain!!

Digesting my feelings lying inside me,
Strangely nobody cared, call me sick.
Teasing me lavishly and my heart is pricked,
Hurted me like hell when addressed me as stupid.
As like showering rain, missing on the lane!!

Time lapse in journey of life,
Can hamper anybody on its path.
When I see innate reflex of mine,
I always use to brightly shine.
Though possessing every job attributes of mine,
I never thought the authorities will ditch and hamper my career line.
Falsely acting bloody swine, making my image as fade as wine.
As like affecting harmonious divine, my soul was, as is transparently pristine!!

Destroying me and testing my patience, Never wanna give up.
Transformed deviations, wanna rightly screw up.
I wanna raise up, I wanna shake up.
I wanna wake up, Tranquilize my mind.
Unzip the professional life compressed by the culprits.
Wanna explore myself, driving the motivated heights of journey.
Lastly waiting for the optimistic opportunity.
Cuffing the suspect ,I wanna rejoice by my pattern of life!!

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Verlena S. Walker April 9, 2014 at 1:55 AM Congratulations on your first place win in my contest Madhavi. smiles and hugs Verlena Maddy Sp April 9, 2014 at 12:01 PM Thanks Verlena, its been my pleasure to participate in your contest and thanks for making me win and placing me first in this contest..Hugs.. ####Madhavi

Roy Jerden January 17, 2014 at 8:15 PM Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest! Maddy Sp April 9, 2014 at 12:05 PM Hi Roy, Thanks..

Roy Jerden January 17, 2014 at 8:14 PM DISTURBED CREATURE- Am I Maddy Sp April 9, 2014 at 12:05 PM :)

Sandra Adams September 8, 2013 at 2:57 PM nicely crafted powerful poem...congrats on your win :) Maddy Sp September 9, 2013 at 3:59 AM Thanks Sandra....##madhavi :)

Skat A September 6, 2013 at 9:29 AM Madhavi, a nice winning poem....SKAT Maddy Sp September 8, 2013 at 9:30 AM Hello skat if you have free time then please go through my new poem..thanks..@@madhavi I hope you may like it.. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=502244 Maddy Sp September 8, 2013 at 9:19 AM Thanks Once again Skat for appreciating my feelings through poem..Hugs..@@Madhavi

Danesh Morgan September 5, 2013 at 11:19 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan Maddy Sp September 8, 2013 at 9:26 AM Firstly thanks buddy for Congratulating me.. I will be feeling great if you take your precious time and go through my new poem..Thanks "Blushing Rose" Mentioning the link.. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=502244

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2013 at 6:08 PM Madhavi, , stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog "....The Death Star Blues...." when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15877&PoetID=18720 always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer Maddy Sp September 8, 2013 at 9:38 AM Thanks Linda for appreciating my poem..I enjoyed Star wars win contest.. It will be my pleasure to participate in your contest again because you are the inspirer..you encourages us a lott..Being the new comer I am enjoying poetrysoup alott That's the spirit babes..thanks..hugs..love you..

John Ginesi August 28, 2013 at 3:54 AM Madhavi, these are strong and powerful words though the poem seems very hard to define to me, perhaps if translated into an easy language it may even border on greatness, you are the writer so I will not say the interpretation is poor as it is your projection into words, I may be missing something from how I read this, so I rated it for it's powerful content, and the fact it is well written. all the best. John Maddy Sp August 29, 2013 at 2:24 AM John here in India such kind of politics you may observe it sometimes. A deserving candidate didn't get a chance but the person who doesn't suits the position nor crack the interview who is been referred by the highly positioned authority gets the job opportunity easily in this corporate world though he is not deserving..and such crap people defines the character in the poem as disturbed creature as he fight for his right's.I hope you may get my poem now.thanks & Your comments are most welcome buddy.. Maddy Sp August 29, 2013 at 2:18 AM Thanks John once again for your lovely comments. Its really been a pleasure that you read and try to understand it so minutely.Well in this poem I have portrayed the character about an employee though serving hard for the company but then too due to the bad polictics he suffered a lot and tries to raise up again without been demotivating himself.Inspite he struggle's hard and get an opportunity in to the Highly tagged company..

Debbie Guzzi August 25, 2013 at 2:58 PM Very good poem my new friend but not a sijo or a dodoitsu..so not for this contest of mine. I hope you do write one, there's time. Light & Love Maddy Sp August 29, 2013 at 2:27 AM Hi Debbie, Thanks for your comment and will surely catch you in some other contest :) Till then tcr..by..