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Distracted

Too many thoughts at the same time I’m distracting myself with a rhyme My brain is on fire With poetic desire But I’m sure this one’s not worth a dime

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Cory Long

Date: 7/13/2011 5:56:00 AM

i liked this very creative and sometimes our mind goes faster then we can think. cory

Robert Ball

Date: 4/7/2011 5:13:00 AM

Oh I forgot to say that I like this poem very much e-mailing this to my friend in New Hampshire, check him out Charlie Pelota he has some poems on this site also, he"s actually been my mentor in my writings, owe it to God and him because I've been blessed. Also you are talented and I have a poem called distractions check it out if you want' close to what I think so keep up the good work ok?

Robert Ball

Date: 4/7/2011 5:10:00 AM

thanks for your comment and this poem is very good, but I have to say that I took poetic liberties with the last poem I wrote, so sorry if the pen stopped flowing in rhyme, can't be perfect all the time' God bless

Date: 4/1/2011 3:51:00 PM

Enjoyed your distraction and it's definitely worth more than a dime. Thanks for your comments, Alexa.

Dana Smith

Date: 3/30/2011 2:10:00 PM

How much is a smile worth? 'Cause this one made me smile:)

Nicole Hawkins

Date: 3/29/2011 6:38:00 PM

I can appreciate this one! Nicely done -Nicole

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/29/2011 10:21:00 AM

Cute, I enjoyed the read. Caryl