Distant Thunder - a Shan-Zi Poem

Water ripples On the pond surface Concentric circles Of perfect shape Raindrops plopping In rhythmic grace Announcing the storm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Joe, congrats on your win, last stanza great haiku...David
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:42 AM
I really like how you did yours, Joe. Congrats for your win.
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July 22, 2012 at 9:29 AM
A magical blend of words, Joe! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 3:14 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..I really like this one..Very descriptive and expressive work...Sara
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:03 AM
Very nice Joe.Congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 5:22 AM
congrats Joe on an amazing win for this incredible poem.. feeling the beauty luv..
Grisetti Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 5:15 PM
I love the way the storm announces itself - beautiful images. Congratulations.
Rozario Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Wonderful...enjoyed your shanzi...best of luck in the contest.
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July 17, 2012 at 4:11 PM
So cool how you put this together. Very nice my friend. Michael
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