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Distant Things

Distant Things


Our memories are distant things
   that live among our yesterdays.
They live in thoughts, and each one brings
   those moments framed in many ways.

Like photographs and video...
   the copies of those moments past;
those distant things we want to know
   are safe within these things that last.

Though often lost...reality;
   we miss the real-time moments when
we strive to make the copies be
   those 'moments' to watch once again.

So oft we view life through a lens,
   or on a cell phone high-tech screen;
events of family or friends...
   but miss the 'in-the-moment' scene.

Our memories are distant things
   that should be felt in real time,
for once they're gone, can never bring
   that 'we are there' joy so sublime.

Our memories are distant things...
   reruns of life replayed once more; 
but copies miss the thrill that brings
   those real-life moments to adore.


June 9, 2016

Contest: Screwed XX
Sponsor: Rob Carmack

~NA~
Judged: 06/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gaul Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Lovely thought and rhyme Sandra. Ah yes, I remember it well.
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you for your visit and supportive comment, Greg! Much appreciated. Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Wonderful poem Sandra! Congratulations on your win :) xomo
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Carmack Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 10:41 PM
Thank you Sandra and congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Rob, for the chance to showcase our rejected poems and for my nice placement! Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 4:55 AM
Very well written and a good poem x
Smith Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Wonderful entry Sandra, best wishes in the contest...
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I appreciate your nice comment and best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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