Distant Rest

Distance breeds new hope,
Time, a measure of being
a life without rest
relentless Love resisting
weakened, awakened in death.


David J. Caldera
04/13/08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 19, 2008 at 1:39 PM
Much said in just five lines. Strong opening line. Nice use of this form. Keep on writing. Best wishes. Karen
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