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Distant Reminder

An anxious feather, began to hover, over a frozen lake of glass. Flying through fire, ever so higher. Into the memories of the long forgotten past. Soaring above the mountain tops while slowly increasing speed. The feather flew higher, with a distant reminder. Just how much a feather can see. A gust of wind will take you anywhere. If only the feather could receive. A dash of hope, a touch of atmosphere. Some wind and the will to go where ever you please.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/29/2013 6:33:00 PM
amazing.... simple and eloquent. dramatic entrance, escalating heart rate, or the unanswered question of what tomorrow might bring isn't necessary for a great poet like yourself!
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Gnikreklaw Walkerking
Date: 7/29/2013 8:15:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words.

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