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Distant Fire

I wanted to be warmed by her fire she came so close then turned her face away. The distant forest of her brown beauty became a lightness of being I wrote her love poems showing her the origins of my inner fire she turned away leaving me with only the ashes of her trees and trembling leaves. I promised her not castles or prophesy of the future to love now is what I needed tomorrow may be too late I said, "love me now" "now love me." Her fire is now so distant and the forest she showed me I love her in absentee dreaming her while awake she said she loved me I who thought I was her master... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Date: 5/14/2014 11:06:00 AM
Hello Ken, your pen's still sparking the soup.. Love the warmth and nice feeling needing and wanting... xox~ Linda
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/14/2014 11:19:00 AM
ok NP...
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Ken Carroll
Date: 5/14/2014 11:16:00 AM
Your visits are always a pleasure Linda!

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