Distant Fire

I wanted to be
warmed by her fire
she came so close
then turned her face away.

The distant forest
of her brown beauty
became a lightness of being
I wrote her love poems
showing her the origins
of my inner fire
she turned away
leaving me with only
the ashes of her trees
and trembling leaves.

I promised her not castles
or prophesy of the future
to love now is what I needed
tomorrow may be too late
I said, "love me now"
"now love me."

Her fire is now so distant
and the forest she showed me
I love her in absentee
dreaming her while awake
she said she loved me
I who thought I was her master...
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 14, 2014 at 11:06 AM
Hello Ken, your pen's still sparking the soup.. Love the warmth and nice feeling needing and wanting... xox~ Linda
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May 14, 2014 at 11:19 AM
ok NP...
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May 14, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Your visits are always a pleasure Linda!
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