Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Distant Calmness

An open field of untouched snow,
brings a distant calmness of my own, that I know
Bright white clouds float before a setting sun
Such beauty at the end of the day, I won
Like a ribbon in a show, a star getting ready to glow
I stand watching, in the stillness of glistening snow

Heidi Sands

12/6/25

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Jerry Brotherton January 1, 2026 at 6:15 AM Such a serene image your words painted. May 2026 be filled with peace and happiness, my friend. Heidi Sands January 1, 2026 at 7:31 AM Hi Jerry. How are you? Thank you for the kind message. Hopefully, I can be here more often this 2026. I hope you have a fulfilling New Year throughout. Enjoy!

Joanna Daniel December 29, 2025 at 11:57 PM Lovely and peaceful, Heidi, happy new year wishes to you and yours:) Heidi Sands December 30, 2025 at 5:46 AM Thank you Joanna. I appreciate your visit. I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year. Enjoy! :)

Quoth Theraven December 24, 2025 at 7:58 PM Hello Heidi, Stillness in wonder, how I miss the snow. Merry Christmas wishes. -Richard Heidi Sands December 25, 2025 at 4:13 PM Thank you! The snow and winter skies are so pretty. I may write a winter sky poem. Merry Christmas Richard. Have a nice rest of your day :)

Joseph May December 8, 2025 at 5:40 AM Lovely write, best wishes Heidi Sands December 10, 2025 at 7:33 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Victor Buhagiar December 8, 2025 at 4:12 AM I love the peace around me. A superb poem. Heidi Sands December 8, 2025 at 5:28 AM Thank you Victor ! I appreciate your comment :)

sara Etgen-Baker December 7, 2025 at 5:24 PM beautiful imagery! Enjoyed your poem. Merry Christmas and hugs Heidi Sands December 7, 2025 at 6:07 PM Thank you very much. Merry Christmas. Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf December 6, 2025 at 8:58 PM Very, very pretty vision, Heidi. Heidi Sands December 7, 2025 at 6:36 AM Thank you Gershon :)

Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2025 at 12:02 PM Hello Heidi,, This scene you described is beautiful. yes in a field with the untouched snow is a beautiful scene. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2025 at 3:48 PM Hello Heidi, Yes the field and the sky can be calming. I agree. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands December 5, 2025 at 12:06 PM Thank you Darlene. The field and sky were calming and beautiful. I appreciate your kind comment. Hugs. :)