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*Still I will make you smile* The moment you turn around Don't be scared if you are alone Remember the last time we met My last words to you Evenif it maybe too late However distance I maybe in Relax your eyes taking a deep breathe Strengthen the thin fingers in your palms Just a moment to wait The feelings I promised to give Ever I left you alone Never did my shadow leave you Ever since I went too far Never did my love went down A chill that will flow in your veins Not tears but my memories will flow through your eyes In the darkness beneathe your eyelashes I promise to smile and make you smile at a second...

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Date: 3/27/2016 4:20:00 AM
You write very beautifully Mr.Echo Biswas ...You seem to be very romantic and sensitive person....That's what your poems portray about you....Keep going my friend....
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Anand Parmale
Date: 3/27/2016 12:51:00 PM
Hey I am apologize Miss EB...
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/27/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you soo much for your lovely words... And I am Miss Echo Biswal... :)
Date: 3/26/2016 10:38:00 AM
Anytime, glad I ran across your poems this morning. Your reply is lovely. Linda
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you... Good morning...
Date: 3/26/2016 9:59:00 AM
A wonderful poem to read, uplifting moments like that count in every way. I am pleased to read this morning, the warmth of making one smile. Linda
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 10:37:00 AM
Thank you soo much...
Date: 3/26/2016 7:32:00 AM
I promise to smile and make you smile at a second... You kept your promise: the poem is happily round.
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thank you soo much... For your appreciation...
Date: 3/26/2016 2:56:00 AM
You are so sweet to keep the smiles alive. Enjoyed. SKAT
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Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 3:32:00 AM
Thank u...

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