dissolving

                                                                                               
Dissolving in Ecstasy  

I take leave
                                                 
facing Awareness alert 
                                     
showing flowery way Homewards     
                                                    
diffuse rainbows riding fast 

           a whispering shoreline    

           blood becomes water    
                                         
           bones skin nails hair lips 

           Spirit sailing soars

            I lived a full life of laughter 

           all praise to God’s Great Love

           weep not for me

           now or evermore ! 

            ~~~~~~~~~~~
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Date: 10/11/2025 6:39:00 PM
Amazing ...." blood becomes water bones skin nails hair lips " raw, hey sorry I've been away...good to see you again!! <3
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 10/11/2025 9:09:00 PM
ThkU, Sweets. Trust you had a good break, love.
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