Dissolve and Vanish

    Dreams that seem to make no sense
      bits and pieces of suspense
    dissolve and vanish before my eyes
      blackmail-spirals, howling skies  

    All exits blocked, no escape
      ghastly images, scimitar-shaped
    horrors dredged-up, long suppressed
      drown in light once awake

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Date: 9/17/2024 10:20:00 AM
Yep -- dreams are in control -- in their own realm of spooky symbolism. Light (dawn) sends them back to deep shadows of consciousness...stores them there, till the next perhaps truthful night of deserved terror. Very Halloween like. Good one, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2024 7:33:00 PM
I was waiting for the 'Halloween comment,' Joe. Thanks for noticing. ~ gw
Date: 9/17/2024 8:20:00 AM
Crazy how those dreams go! Often times I am watching my dream. One of my favorite dreams of late was seeing my brother through a window, driving a carriage, then being surprised as the horses hover above the ground…perhaps my bro is Santa…lol! I shared the dream with him. Too fun, much better than the horror show. Blessings and sweet dreams!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2024 7:34:00 PM
Or perhaps your brother is E.T. ~ Fon Hume
Date: 9/16/2024 4:26:00 PM
Hello Gershon, A dream i have many times does not make sense. I am in a green dress. My bouquet of green cloudy vision of him changes. vegetables. I do not know whom i am marrying. the cloudy vision of him changes. A strange dream i have often. Enjoy your evennig my friend. /Darlene/
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2024 7:35:00 PM
Don't forget to invite me to the 'Dream Wedding,' Darlene! Smiles for Miles, Gershon
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/17/2024 10:16:00 AM
Hello Gershon, Oh, you know that makes sense to me. I never thought of that. Enjoyu your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2024 8:19:00 PM
Maybe you are marrying the 'Jolly Green Giant,' Darlene! ~ Fruits and Veggies, gw
Date: 9/16/2024 9:28:00 AM
Hello Gershon, Well said that the fleeting aspects of dreams are just that. I love sleeping in a little longer on Saturdays because that's when I remember most of the fleeting dreams. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2024 7:36:00 PM
You are one lucky dude, Daniel. Most of my dreams are eminently forgettable!! ~ Gershon
Date: 9/16/2024 5:10:00 AM
now go close the window...and yes, you did lock it last night....heheee
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2024 8:21:00 PM
Tee-hee, John. Locks aren't all they're cracked up to be, eh?! Lox and bagels ain't either... ~ Safe-cracker
Date: 9/16/2024 2:42:00 AM
Brilliantly penned, Gershon. Our dreams can take us to uncharted realms. ~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2024 8:30:00 PM
That's for sure, Regina. Just like Planet Earth in a way: What's under the ocean is largely uncharted, like the dreams that bubble p from or subconscious. Cheers, gw
Date: 9/16/2024 12:24:00 AM
Ah those nightmares Gershon, and those loopy dreams - Scary. The worst thing is remembering them. If i wake with one of them - I remind myself it's only a dream and to rewind. Maria
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2024 8:32:00 PM
100% Remembering nightmares is scarier than having them sometimes. Thanks for the insight, Maria. Here's to pleasant(!) dreams. :) Gershon
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