Disquiet

Being with child has caused much disquiet
The King and Queen will send her away
Oh! Romeo longs to comfort Juliet

Being with chld has caused much disquiet
This dilemia suits all the piets
While it fills Romeo and Juliet's dismay

Being with child has caused much disquiet
The King and Queen will send her away 


Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
Contest: Juliet
Date: February 11, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 1:13 PM
A great one Sara,gl in the contest.
Sivey Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:41 AM
This is quite the masterful Triolet my friend! You have done wonderfully with this delightful poem! Your skills are surely shown pleasantly here this morning! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Eggins Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 7:49 AM
beautifully done Sara I thoroughly enjoyed this :) good luck in the comp you get a 7 from me love Jayne x
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