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A mix of snow and sleet arrives today Sticking and freezing in a cold display Of white all around and skies are gray A slippery time to drive or to play Inside near the woodstove, I want to stay I forgot the cocoa, so coffee has a way Of sending the cold feelings away! Heidi Sands 12/28/18

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 12/29/2018 12:10:00 AM

I feel the warmth just reading this. Cozy imagery, I say, feeling the need for a cup of cocoa, or coffee! Nicely done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/29/2018 6:48:00 AM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you Sandy :)

Michael Wise

Date: 12/28/2018 11:00:00 AM

Nice! I totally concur! Not a fan of going out in the cold or snow anymore! You had me at coffee and woodstove!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2018 11:30:00 AM

Thank you Michael. I appreciate your visit and comment. Yes, it is very nice with the woodstove and coffee :) Have a nice day!

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/28/2018 8:46:00 AM

What a sight! I live in the tropics so I'm delighted with your poetic display of what you do this Winter. Thanks for sharing. God bless you.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Beata! Oh, the tropics sound nice! Have a nice day! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/28/2018 8:46:00 AM

Sounds like a gray day, despite the beauty of white snow all around. Enjoy the comforts of indoors, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2018 9:42:00 AM

Hi. Yes it is Vijay. The roads are VERY bad too with ice. Thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/28/2018 8:28:00 AM

I'm with Maureen, how I'd love to be in front of a wood burning stove sipping a hot cup of coffee right now. Beautiful Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Chris. I am grateful. I also appreciate your kind comment! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/28/2018 8:10:00 AM

I'm jealous of your quiet country woodstove equipped home ;) another lovely poem! xomo <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/28/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Maureen. I am grateful for where I am. It is not fancy, just an artistic cabin, but cozy with beautiful sights!