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Displacing Dandelions

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They stand tall with their yellow coat, Before they send their saintly seeds afloat… Spiritual soldiers in silence softly set sail, Through fields of dreams with a tenuous trail. Dancing and drifting until the wind has gone, Bringers of wishes decorating the dawn... Panoramic puffballs pollinating the view, Under heavenly skies of bewitching blue. The sacrificial soldiers will not return, As their love diminishes we will always yearn… Dandelions of the seraphical sacred sun, With beauty unleashed your will, be done. April.11.2019 DANDELIONS Poetry Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2019 11:00:00 PM

Sorry this did not take First Place WW but it does in my book, as you know I faved it. Congratulations on your deserving win! : ) xxoo

Joseph May

Date: 4/17/2019 6:03:00 PM

Beautiful write WW...Congrats on your win..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2019 10:00:00 AM

W.W., you have elevated the common dandelion to the ranks of royalty with this majestic write! Congrats on your win in the contest and best wishes, Gershon

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/17/2019 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful poem my friend ~ start to finish :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/12/2019 5:07:00 PM

OMG this is outstanding WW! You have elevated this little flower, often referred to as a bothersome weed, to a divine statis, something I tried to do, but not nearly as well. This gem is going into my Faves! I can see this in the top spot! : ) xxoo

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/12/2019 2:06:00 PM

A beautiful poetic approach to the drifting dandelion . mY compliments, W.W.!

David Mchattie

Date: 4/11/2019 11:11:00 AM

I've never thought of dandelions as weeds. I've always liked them. Have a great day. Great poem.