Displaced

Tossed high up in air
Cradled in valiant fort
Oust Archimedes
Vastness being inside the dot
White dreams ignobly sold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 24, 2016 at 2:21 PM
You have said a lot in a few lines, Samiha, and you prompt us to muse on the points you raise. Often we are slaves of 'acceptance', making do with the minimum, like being happy not to be sad...to be just living rather than being dead! ~ Warm regards // paul
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November 24, 2016 at 2:54 PM
So beautifully extracted the gist of sea of emotions. Thanks Paul.
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