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Tossed high up in air Cradled in valiant fort Oust Archimedes Vastness being inside the dot White dreams ignobly sold

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Date: 11/24/2016 2:21:00 PM
You have said a lot in a few lines, Samiha, and you prompt us to muse on the points you raise. Often we are slaves of 'acceptance', making do with the minimum, like being happy not to be sad...to be just living rather than being dead! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/24/2016 2:54:00 PM
So beautifully extracted the gist of sea of emotions. Thanks Paul.

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