Disobedience

A foible is the result of a flaw
in those disobeying the Law;
our ancestors defied God,
not honoring their Lord...
and they lost all the richness they saw.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Good one Andrew. Congrats on your win!
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congrats, Andrew. Great write. You and yours have a gtreat weekend. Rgds, Ralph
Freeman Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 10:57 PM
Disobedience to the law of the life system itself. We should be able to see this in events creeping up all around us, Andrew. Congratulations with this worthy presentation in the contest,. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Great idea that you have developed in this one..Good luck in the contest..Keep the magic pen flowing..Sara
Spence Sr Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 12:59 PM
This sounds logical. The message is quite obvious and is consistent with the theme. Great job, Joseph
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