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She dubs
worn thin
sounds
that assault
bounce back
further spread
in barbed spikes
of dark and
ruby delicacy 

mutters
of consternation
furthermore, 
panics
she will
break or
go down 
in tears

screeches
 fill her
dreams
her mouth
her ears

August 06, 2022

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Date: 8/7/2022 6:03:00 AM
Her trepidations resonate through your words. Poignant vibes well conveyed, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/7/2022 2:49:00 AM
Very descriptive work you have done in this one. She does look forlorn. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 8/6/2022 10:10:00 PM
She stands as a boulder of frozen sorrow. The panic and consternation she experiences are powerfully brought out. A very poignant poem.... .
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Date: 8/6/2022 10:03:00 PM
These short lines punctuate he emotions and imagery of the writer. Well done.
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