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The show completely whirls me over. Each device has its stance grow closer. Dreams are being shattered in some way. Lead to tying up a chain of fears of dismay. You can't fly with an extensive period of pain. Farewell kisses are altogether the grave vain. The trip of a wet bird is bound to decay. How leads are adored softly by a waterway. Leave on an excursion to greatness. Divine love streams from the fireless. Take a walk around the radiant weather. Initial impressions of a bizarre culture. Wind, trill, age flying ring a mighty bell to mind. Is it fair to note death now that I'm outside?
Written: October 19, 2021

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Date: 10/20/2021 2:22:00 AM
Such a great sonnet. Deep in meaning too.
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