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Disillusioned

A swath of envy
Opened up loudly today
Offering something
But there’s no way out
I’m very disillusioned
Envy stings beyond

Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

September 29, 2011 at 7:15 PM

a swath of envy, a touch of pain, story telling, is it saying, envy in me yet again :) good stuff mate....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 27, 2011 at 11:47 PM

feeling the emotion in this piece Russell.. yes last line is very true .. a perfect Choka ..luv..

Judy Ball

September 27, 2011 at 5:44 PM

Ohhhhh! Been there and done that. It sure hurts when people you thought were your friends envy your progress if they don't gain something too. That's the reason for a sign I have on my car that says: "THE MORE PEOPLE I MEET THE MORE I LIKE MY DOG." The way I see it your success doesn't set me back one bit so more power to you. Nice job here my friend. God Bless, JB