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Disillusioned

A swath of envy Opened up loudly today Offering something But there’s no way out I’m very disillusioned Envy stings beyond
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/29/2011 7:15:00 PM
a swath of envy, a touch of pain, story telling, is it saying, envy in me yet again :) good stuff mate....
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:47:00 PM
feeling the emotion in this piece Russell.. yes last line is very true .. a perfect Choka ..luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 5:44:00 PM
Ohhhhh! Been there and done that. It sure hurts when people you thought were your friends envy your progress if they don't gain something too. That's the reason for a sign I have on my car that says: "THE MORE PEOPLE I MEET THE MORE I LIKE MY DOG." The way I see it your success doesn't set me back one bit so more power to you. Nice job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/27/2011 5:41:00 AM
love the struggle of emotions here, russel... ohh, swel job! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:21:00 AM
Russ, Your poem did what the title said. I was diillusioned wanting to read more of your good poem.I like your poems. Crossfox-Bill
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:19:00 AM
This makes me wonder what happened to you today, Russell!!!
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Date: 9/26/2011 11:43:00 PM
I sent you an e-mail concerning your contest a couple days ago, still awaiting reply
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