Disillusioned

What if we are all in someone's dream
Reality non-existant, not as it seems
No plan, no God, no ruler supreme
Everything a vision of alternative theme

Envision all taught since young - misheard
Provision just wasted, Gods promise is absurd
Decision made - making history blurred
Derision, ridiculing His holy written word

Making, creating - it's all gone wrong
Society is impressionable - drifts along
Even though we speak different tongue
We understand in others dreams privacy belongs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 11:07 PM
boy, that would be so weird, Ann Marie, I sure hope not! Unamuno, a Spanish author, loved that theme of life is a dream! Guess we will nothing for sure until we die. I"m happy you enjoyed my black swan. Did you see the movie or something? Luv, Andrea
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December 4, 2008 at 8:46 AM
There is much to think about here... splendid monorhymes and a pleasing cadence. Well done Anne-Marie! Best wishes, Keith
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