Girl seated by shore, 1878 , painting by George Elgar Hicks
The bedraggled beget bedfellows with Tangled hair, tattered sleeves, a sea churn chaotic. Comfort is found in a rumpled, ruffled unkempt state, Shared by a weary soul and a heartless sea sat beside. For sorrow will draw in where sorrow has been. Churn will discern a likeness for agitation, Beyond the calm that demands order, prim, proper, neat. For it's disorder that makes a ruffled mind Seek solace in a ragged heart, torn, and well worn.
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