Robert A. Dufresne Poet Rictameter

Disguised Blessing

.                                    Broken
                                  hearted lover
                             dreaming of her again.
                           He refuses his future now.
                     Without her he feels time refuses him.
                        Breathless in pain’s radiation,
                           He could not now fathom,
                            heart was blessed ...not
                                      Broken.

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Joann Grisetti June 4, 2012 at 10:08 AM I really like the last two lines - makes the poem special. Thanks for your comment on Clatter - it really made me laugh, and I needed a laugh.

Elizabeth Wesley May 31, 2012 at 2:52 PM Yes, the pain is so difficult to bear when things go awry in a relationship. Love that line "breathless in pain's radiation" it is so filled with meaning. Luv, Elizabeth

Shaz Cheesman May 31, 2012 at 4:52 AM Oh really nice Robert....."heart was blessed....not Broken" great write