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Disguised Blessing

. Broken hearted lover dreaming of her again. He refuses his future now. Without her he feels time refuses him. Breathless in pain’s radiation, He could not now fathom, heart was blessed ...not Broken.

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/4/2012 10:08:00 AM

I really like the last two lines - makes the poem special. Thanks for your comment on Clatter - it really made me laugh, and I needed a laugh.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/31/2012 2:52:00 PM

Yes, the pain is so difficult to bear when things go awry in a relationship. Love that line "breathless in pain's radiation" it is so filled with meaning. Luv, Elizabeth

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 5/31/2012 4:52:00 AM

Oh really nice Robert....."heart was blessed....not Broken" great write