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Disenchanted Sandcastles

Disenchanted sandcastles Alone on a silent shoreline, sea breeze emotions paint my skin Sands of time slip away as I count the stars wondering why so many seem to smile, when I don’t Storm fence pickets stand straight, weathered of years watching Holding at bay the impending dunes where my footprints once shared these moments with another Salt water teardrops fall, meeting the beach in sorrow’d pools, lonely silhouettes of my heart shaped shadows empty and vacant, longing for that one to forgive Disenchanted sandcastles disappear with the tide as do these words we compiled together never to be written again, on paper or in the sand Now I only watch my dreams fade into the horizon, vanishing forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/7/2018 5:49:00 AM
I love the ocean and that was beautiful; had to "fav" it.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thank you M.L. for all of your kindness.
Date: 12/6/2018 3:27:00 PM
riveting scene which breaks my heart , chris... your pensive language speaks of love gone like sand... how eloquent can your pen be... so beautiful, please say this is fiction...huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2018 3:28:00 PM
I wish I could my friend, I really wish I could. Thank you so much Nette for bringing a smile by for me today.
Date: 12/6/2018 12:36:00 PM
your poem written with so much emoting and imagery,, it is wonderful and well written ..
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Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2018 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much Eve.
Date: 12/6/2018 11:37:00 AM
Losing some one leaves a mark on our heart. It is not easy to pick up life where we left off. It is hard to let go of some one when words were spoken. It shatters our dreams and hopes for the future. I wish you only the best. This was written from the heart. I can feel it. It was very nicely said. I will keep you in my prayers.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Bette. It was written from a place in my heart that feels extremely empty but your kindness helps fill that empty spot. Thank you again.
Date: 12/6/2018 10:19:00 AM
Woeful and beautiful, xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2018 11:38:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 12/6/2018 10:08:00 AM
Wow, heartbreaking process of letting go of dreams. The lines about never writing the words Again ...hit hard. Well written.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2018 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi for always being so nice to me.

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