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Disdainful Haiku

Raped by Confusion No one has a clue about My lame, weird haiku   Disdain is like rain, Dripping continuely...yet I ponder...wander I think about you And how treated me so You're as sweet as pie Something is missing Oh! Something drives me insane... Disdainful haiku Why are unclear? You're like a Positive Sheep But, in wolve's clothing Something smells fishy Is it your odor or what? Your attitude stinks I think about you You've treated me badly...how Dare you...oh you jerk!! Drain away your tears Don't bottle it up inside Angst pierces my soul Disdainful haiku - Why are you so cruel to me? Never stop trying (poets)!!!

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Date: 7/2/2011 9:05:00 PM
A great haiku..want to read more from you... so wonderful... ^_^ jun-jun
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