Discotheque

Heart's throbbing for discothèque
airwaves,
pulsating electronica polyphonics--
rolling;
waterless waves splash
everyone present. 
Motionless reminiscence of Ibiza
and surrealism, triple-distilled,
aesthetic kinetics--
and men and women sweating from the vibes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 3, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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July 3, 2014 at 11:11 AM
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