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" SPIRITUALITY " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN< MY PHOTO, ©

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While the spiritual Man srives heavens to reach the carnal one refuses to leave the ground!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
       06 July 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:48 AM
The poor misguided carnal man thinks Earth and its materialism is his heaven, it is hard to convince such a person. A brilliant Monoku my dearest friend....Maria xxx
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:20 PM
A great visual in words, DT!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you my friend, Lyric Man!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Indeed, there are souls who are attracted to spirituality and look up to Divinity and others who feed on and rejoice the material dimensions of the world.. that's God's divine wisdom! Maintaining the balance of existence and highlightening Beauty when compared to ugliness! A profound Monoku, a great pleasure to read.. stay safe and blessed always dear Demetrios.
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July 7, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thank you for your precious comment dearest, Besma. Stay blessed my friend!
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 12:54 PM
- The day will come ... for all - A thoughtful line, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Yes, so true but till then the carnal may cause serious damage to the spiritual! Thank you so very much my dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs
Pandit Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Love that serene white rose! Your poems always speak volumes in just a few words..well done my friend, Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:54 AM
I am happy you enjoy my flowers and also my poems which might be meaningful but not very popular however, I will keep writing them even if no-one comments! Thank you for your appreciation it is so important my friend, Vijay!
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July 6, 2018 at 6:08 AM
But the carnal man will die one day and will have no choice in his final destination. How he has led his life will determine his fate. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:51 AM
True my friend, Tom but till he dies could cause a lot of troubles to the spiritual one! Thank you so very much for lovely comment!
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