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i tried to tell you but you would not listen.... had to go and be a man "baby don't go they will get you" and my heart bled when they said you were dead the year passed by so slow i did nothing to get ahead i know to others i act so simple this is alright because i live my life in my head so i'll close this poem of of sadness and truth and to your memory i will continue to be wed even in death by janetta harrington

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Date: 6/19/2010 2:04:00 PM
There is always another day and the sun will rise and shine on your face. Congratulations of being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:00:00 AM
So sad. Congrats on this selection. love. daver
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Janetta. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2010 5:44:00 PM
Janetta, I can relate to this poem. I know my husband is with me and that is the way I want it to be. God Bless and keep up the good work, Cile
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:17:00 AM
Congrats. on your poem being connected this week. Smile! Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:13:00 AM
he was very fortunate to have you in his life and in his continued life .... inside you forever. thank you for sharing, chuck
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:31:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations to a talented poet. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:01:00 PM
Congratulations to a talented poet. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:43:00 PM
Congrats Janetta on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:08:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in a heartfelt way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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