Discomforted Summer

Spring passed
here is Summer
at last, not her last

lasting grief, summer’s relief
cool waters flow
seasons surpass

dictates of time
as we tread water
especially her spouse

he finds slight smile
in a bottle, birds
nibbling seeds

his kids calling
on him, expecting
not too much

he is a gentle soul
supposed to be
with his other half

Summer sun
will ne’er be
a comfort

nor sea nor sand,
a shovelful or grain,
sifts through his fingers

starfish in the sky
interest his gaze
missing arms and legs

seasons will come’n go
beachcombers will bum
the sea’s in his eyes

the sun burns
immemorial
no June*

6/21/2021

*mom’s name
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Balasubramanian Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Last line was so moving. Wonderfully penned. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Rama. Appreciate your comment.
Merryman Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Kim, your poem is so moving and that last stanza is a tear jerker. Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Kim. Yes, our hearts hurt.
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Early or late summer for me, not a lover of heat. Hope you're well Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Thanks, Tom! You too! Stay cool, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Thank God for summer though I prefer Spring. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 12:50 PM
My fave season is Fall!
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