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Discombobulation: A Word

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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 January 26
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What sorts a box -- an enigma, of course, what else has sauce, when it apprised of a stigma it eyes wherefrom the source. Taste, touch, ... senses play the fiddle minus some chords, off-tunes, wayward announces a riddle, classic ... playing the blues. Discombobulation, a word that creates attention, it's a doer, that is absurd, a giver of mention, need not be lengthy, quite disturbed, more elementary, there lies the mix, that's somewhat blurred, most complimentary. Shorten won't baffle, nor ruffle, may muddle or addle, there are trickery, kerfuffle -- but snooze in a cradle, grounds content, shovel the gravel, make it your battleground, make confound this awkward puzzle by day's end be profound. Hope that it resolves this fluster, that sets unease, evolves, make it a game, a tongue twister, keep watch till it dissolves, It'll be a throwback, bewilder if it grows, we'll keep track, discombobulation, blister, made it less from perplex.

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Date: 1/27/2024 8:45:00 AM
I really like how you did this, my friend. Also i have a question for you in Soupmail.
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Date: 1/27/2024 9:26:00 AM
ok mouse is weird typing fas ok sorpmailll sorryf Andreacsf
Date: 1/26/2024 2:09:00 PM
a witty and clever poem....amazing how you said what you wanted to say and kept to a unique rhyme scheme. Well done, Sir...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 1/26/2024 2:52:00 PM
As Kim states in her contest, "weave in and out of reality" and, "cause it rhymes doesn’t mean it makes sense," and one I bear watching, "please!"--LOL, thanks and Aloha, William

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