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02/08/24

Discombobulation

Second Place

Contest by Fire Bird

Discombobulation

       Discombobulation                        

           Reminiscences to go through.
           Too confused whether to pursue   
          To cherish, discard or collect !
           Which to honor, which to reject?

            To stand optimist being strict !
            Despair and credence in conflict.
           Mind runs restless, brain dictates.
          Heart yearns, intelligence hesitates.

           Thought processes going jumbled.
            Activities getting crumbled.
             How to straighten distortion.
             So much discombobulation.
   
            Everything seeming to be disarranged !
           How to assemble or manage !
           Where to find my only console ?
            How to attttain ultimate goal ?
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Sidwell Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your placement for your well conceived and executed poem! A very enjoyable read.
Bell Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Discombobulation. That will be my word of the week. Or was that last week. Who needs goals, a.
George Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 4:15 AM
The vagaries of a confused mind are powerfully presented. This is a muddled state of mind we all feel many a time. Enjoyed reading this beautifully rhyming poem, dear Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Thanks. Blessings.
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