Discombobulation

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02/08/24

Discombobulation

Second Place

Contest by Fire Bird

Discombobulation Reminiscences to go through. Too confused whether to pursue To cherish, discard or collect ! Which to honor, which to reject? To stand optimist being strict ! Despair and credence in conflict. Mind runs restless, brain dictates. Heart yearns, intelligence hesitates. Thought processes going jumbled. Activities getting crumbled. How to straighten distortion. So much discombobulation. Everything seeming to be disarranged ! How to assemble or manage ! Where to find my only console ? How to attttain ultimate goal ?

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 2/15/2024 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement for your well conceived and executed poem! A very enjoyable read.

Paul Bell

Date: 2/11/2024 6:31:00 AM

Discombobulation. That will be my word of the week. Or was that last week. Who needs goals, a.

Valsa George

Date: 2/10/2024 4:15:00 AM

The vagaries of a confused mind are powerfully presented. This is a muddled state of mind we all feel many a time. Enjoyed reading this beautifully rhyming poem, dear Anisha.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/10/2024 4:55:00 AM

Thanks. Blessings.