Discombobulation

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Written: January 25, 2024 _______________________________________ Time eludes us as a cryptic puzzle. This is our opportunity to seize it. Spaces have a distinct sequence. We must sustain our life pattern. Shaken extremities. It is scarce to start a fire with obsidian. Still, it's worth lingering in the night. Murmuring shards from an aloof past. highlighted the impact of our says a few weeks ago. and the deep impact it can wield. Yet, we must aim to define our souls Let your voice billow amid a pool of views. thence, it's crucial to stay vigilant. even when progress is slow. Life seems a scary puzzle conundrum. But we must never lose our goals. It may appear such a mundane day. yet one day might alter everything. Several ideas may whirl in the mind. We are obliged to strive forward. spreading our thoughts globally. even amidst the perplexity. or if our ideas are running dry. It is crucial to bear in mind. All us are crucial to a larger target. Let us manage our time well. Embrace each fleeting moment in this state of discombobulation.

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Silent One

Date: 1/26/2024 12:40:00 PM

Dear Sotto, you adeptly captures the sense of urgency that permeates our journey through time, likening it to a cryptic puzzle whose pieces we must decipher and assemble. In emphasizing the distinct sequence of spaces and the need to sustain our life patterns, the poem underscores the importance of intentionality and mindfulness in navigating the passage of time...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2024 11:14:00 AM

Creative lines for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/26/2024 11:07:00 AM

Dearest Lasaad! This poem is a perfect articulation of the theme - our world turned on its head through a maze of conundrums! So many delightful images that speak of "perplexity," and "cryptic puzzles." I love your final line about embracing this state of mind where we feel unbalanced yet continue to strive! This poem is wonderfully conceived! Blessings, dear friend! Best wishes for the contest!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2024 10:21:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Hope you are OK... Good Luck... Have a blessed day writing away......................

Jay Narain

Date: 1/26/2024 9:44:00 AM

Nice poem.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/26/2024 6:04:00 AM

Your thoughts search for light when in state of confusion and discomfort. And your poem shows a way to exist the state of mind.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2024 5:04:00 AM

Life is always bringing in problems and some mental confusion. Since my fall last year, my muse seems to have vanished. Yours is always on the right track, a poem of well argued subjected with great meta phors.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/25/2024 8:38:00 PM

Ah as always dr sotto your poem is not only flowing with brilliant diction and captivating wordplay, and metaphors, but also with si much depth and what youv conveyed here is soulful, and so very powerful: i agree with your life is not always a linear line or as we would like, things may change any time and the best we could do is seize the day and appreciate what we have. I especially loved how you’ve said “Life seems a scary puzzle conundrum. But we must never lose our goals.” Impeccable!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/25/2024 2:43:00 PM

a stunning creation for the contest with your concept of discombobulation. You've beautifully woven your philosophy/values into your poem. I agree with these lines: 'Life seems a scary puzzle conundrum. But we must never lose our goals. It may appear such a mundane day. yet one day might alter everything." Who knows what life altering event will occur on any given day? I've learned to be prepared for just that...I will not lie in wait and live in mediocrity! hugs, your poetess friend in Texas.