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Discombobulation

A poem is needed.
Shall I write a poem, have I succeeded? 
First I have to take a walk.
Or should I talk?
Or is it a swim I should take?
Breast stroke I think, my mistake.
Have to pat my cat.
Oh it turned into a dog, fancy that, 
So I swam down the street. Or did I hop ? 
Must write that poem, cannot stop..
Will we rest a while?
Should I smile?
No I must go, it’s time for me to stay.
What will I do yesterday?
Is it tomorrow already?
Am I backstroking steady?
Can’t see behind.
So how will I unwind?
Do you know me? 
I know who I used to be.
I wasn’t an elephant in the zoo.
Thinking forward I know what to do.
I have to try to write a cat.
No, it isn’t that.
Will you help me learn the alphabet.
Then I know what we can get.
A new cat from the vet.
I will ask the vets nurse.
To point me in the direction of a verse.
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Date: 1/26/2024 4:40:00 AM
Yes, I agree this is totally discombobulated plus it would work as imagination as well. LOL..I enjoyed reading your post. It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it today and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/26/2024 5:58:00 AM
Some contests are just plain fun. Thanks for the comments Sara. Every best wish from Wen
Date: 1/25/2024 1:29:00 PM
hahahha, wait, hahha-Funniest ever! I don't know..it's like Justin Timberlake meets the universe of poetry? Love it! I hope I'm not being insincere.
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Date: 1/26/2024 9:18:00 AM
Great entry!
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Date: 1/25/2024 11:11:00 PM
hmmm do I believe this lady ????? :) Thanks for your sincere comment dear friend. Glad I gave you a laugh. I looked up this fella Justin and couldn't find anything like my poem ???
Date: 1/25/2024 8:12:00 AM
Your poem captivated me with its carefree rhythm, dear SV - a fanciful odyssey into the labyrinth of existence. Like a painting in the mind's untamed landscape, the sound of your laughter reverberates through every line.
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Date: 1/25/2024 11:13:00 PM
Sweet Las, thank you for your lovely comment. I assure you this one took no skill to write, but I am glad it pleased. Many thanks and best wishes.
Date: 1/24/2024 4:46:00 PM
great job to describe that word!!
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Date: 1/24/2024 9:53:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, making light of a sad subject, but sometimes its a better way to look at it. Best wishes from Wen
Date: 1/24/2024 10:53:00 AM
Humorous poem. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/24/2024 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Jay, I think the image was harder to create than the poem. Best wishes from Wen
Date: 1/24/2024 1:13:00 AM
Quite a fun poem. I used to love swimming but stopped since last illness.
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Date: 1/24/2024 1:23:00 AM
Yes Victor I too love swimming but unfortunately I cant manage it either now. A confused state is quite easy to impersonate, but not funny for those that are trapped that way most of the time. Best wishes from Wen.
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