DISCOMBOBULATED

discombobulated~  
days spin like mismatched seasons,
spiraling who-knows-where

11th grade12th gradehumoroussenryu

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Gershon Wolf

May 26, 2026 at 7:19 PM

One of my all-time favorite words that Mom taught me. Thanks, Sara.

Sotto Poet

May 26, 2026 at 5:46 AM

I echo William's comment here. If it were simply defined as advance, we could prevent any unnecessary use of energy.

Kim Rodrigues

May 25, 2026 at 6:59 PM

I feel that.

William Kelii Kekaula

May 25, 2026 at 5:25 PM

If only it could be measured beforehand, we could deter any waste of energized time.

Joe Maverick

May 25, 2026 at 4:07 PM

Exactly Sara...I am pained to say the Poem i did titles Oh the shame of Oregon..Has disappeared? Along with Your measured comment..Not my doing I thouught TYLER DWIGHTS STORY NEEDED HEARING.? However i Shall put up a new one as i put to Tom Cunningham only not as tame!!! All blessings Joe.)