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My head is a television With the dream channel turned on It always turns on Once I forget about this world The screen becomes clear and more focused Once I’m far, far away from here The colors beyond the normal spectrum Are animated and strangely surrealistic Almost paranormal Anyone and everyone are welcome To tune into my station It’s easy With eyes closed, just forget About this world for awhile Believe in the unbelievable Imagine the unimaginable Tune in . . . turn on And replace your head with a television Just remember, don’t lose the remote

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Date: 9/13/2024 7:01:00 AM
Omg! I have one with the same theme. I'll find it and post it. If your head is truly like this, then it's like mine! Just like mine! Brilliant!
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Date: 8/12/2024 11:56:00 AM
In the fuzz... the divine speaks. When you clear your mind and let go of ego and dismiss your thoughts the universe speaks. And then profound thoughts drop. And congrats on getting past Theta level.
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Date: 8/7/2024 7:04:00 PM
Ah, yes, don't lose it. Unique perspective-
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/7/2024 7:11:00 PM
Thanks. I believe everyone's unique even if they don't know it.
Date: 8/7/2024 12:50:00 PM
Cool Benjamin. I like the first two lines. I'm going to do just that - turn my head into a TV. I think I do something like that just before I go to sleep. Also, good idea, "don't lose the remote"!
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/7/2024 7:10:00 PM
It's the funny child being exposed. I just can't help myself. Thanks for the read.
Date: 7/12/2024 8:41:00 PM
An intriguing invite to enjoy and the entity that saves, lost when needed then puposes need for the lost, Aloha William
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Date: 7/11/2024 7:56:00 PM
Amazing creativity here, Benjamin. Bravo! By the way, my head is like a strawberry --- without the berry! lol. :) Gershon
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 8/7/2024 7:09:00 PM
Thanks!

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