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Disclaimer

I disclaim your anger
Every word I despise
despite your promises
my pounding your walls
my wish to change you
fails.

Your frenzied yells
bounce off my wall
no longer intimidated
impaired by paralysis
this force within
wins.

I fell for you
tiptoed around you
sometimes you accepted
or took me for granted
or used me as crutch

You are now imprisoned
within my indifference

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Richard Lamoureux

June 27, 2018 at 8:44 AM

I enjoyed rereading this one again. The weight of your words is visceral.

James Swartz

June 3, 2018 at 12:41 PM

Such moving words that most can relate to. Your ending is how the strong move on and live to find happiness again.

Eve Roper

April 28, 2018 at 10:12 PM

heartbreakingly sad, Darren, but very beautiful.. I ordered your book today I am anxious to receive it.it says I should have it my May 1st. Hugs dear friend

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 27, 2018 at 1:20 PM

Hello Darren,you can not change a person, to what you want them to be. The person can only change if they want to change. have a nice day my friend.

Aurore Severo

April 25, 2018 at 11:47 PM

I wrap my arms around you, I read every line. xoxoxo

Darren White

April 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thank you Aurore, that is so nice of you :)

Richard Lamoureux

April 17, 2018 at 7:38 AM

Emotionally substantive. Exceptional writing Darren.

Noel Mcleod

April 10, 2018 at 5:21 PM

Oh Darren, such a heart-wrenchingly beautiful written poem. I hope you're taking good care of yourself, I look forward to reading more lovely placement of words from you soon :) Your friend, Noel

FJ Thomas

April 2, 2018 at 11:50 AM

Wow! Explosively awesome DW! ...though I do hope the pain is fictitious.

Jean Murray

March 30, 2018 at 4:18 PM

Not Jason surely?

CayCay Godwin

March 29, 2018 at 1:18 PM

Hi, stranger! Where to begin catching up? I know not, so after being shut down March-Nov and returning to find you temporarily gone, I put off figuring out how to jump back in our friendship. I HAVE MISSED YOU so much, don't let my silence fool you. Kyle, too. This poem (I will go there) could have been written by me, I've had this relationship and your last line perfectly and dramatically sums up the final feeling. You've still got it and I still want it. (my email same-lost urs) Hugs-CayCay

Darren White

March 29, 2018 at 1:20 PM

i will write you back. I thought you didn't want contact anymore. Hugs for Kyle and you :)