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Discardions From The Day

Written: November 26, 2023 _______________________________________ In ephemeral moments Whispering remembrance, Of gilded blooms Once shoved Embedded into priceless papyrus. I dwell in visions that have faded away Life is thwarted by shaping it Beyond vibrant hues Stardust tumbles down Blisters of emptiness A silence that pervades. Alone, holding only gray Sorrow tightened A heart's wound is reopened To beat uncertainty. Into an intricate mind Tones of gray scale.

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/27/2023 6:47:00 PM

I was enveloped into your loneliness and gray immediately. All of your words echoing cries of sadness and deep introspection. I felt alone with you as if we both sat together and yet were unaware of each other’s presence. I especially liked ~ Alone, holding only gray Sorrow tightened . You have an amazing gift . A fav for me . Hugs to you dear Sotto Poet , Susan :)

Silent One

Date: 11/27/2023 7:28:00 AM

An excellent analogy.. I love this stanza in particular.. I dwell in visions that have faded away Life is thwarted by shaping it Beyond vibrant hues Stardust tumbles down Blisters of emptiness A silence that pervades.. As always you decorate this site with your wonderful word weaving..

Paige Hind

Date: 11/26/2023 8:18:00 PM

Very deep. You portrayed your sorrow in such a gifted way....

Jay Narain

Date: 11/26/2023 10:01:00 AM

Sentimental and nice poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/26/2023 9:59:00 AM

This is so deeply moving and soul stirring how you’ve expressed and described loneliness and sorrow is beyond brilliant and beautiful, I especially love the lines “ I dwell in visions that have faded away Life is thwarted by shaping it“ so touching, and well articulated “ Alone, holding only gray Sorrow tightenedA heart's wound is reopened To beat uncertainty“ these words truly are soul hitting! Powerful write this is. Definitely a fave for me. Pleasure reading your deep and introspective pomes