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Discarded Torn Corner of Salt Packet

Discarded torn corner of salt packet Word alt still visible in faded red letters Last bit of freedom, feeling the wind Heading toward the mountains In eagle’s sharp beak Will soon be intertwined in twigs Softening eaglet’s nest Enjoying wind while she can

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/24/2019 9:10:00 PM
You've given 'alt' Andy Warhol's proverbial '15 seconds of fame!' Pretty interesting. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/25/2019 6:18:00 AM
I saw a torn corner of a salt packet on the floor of the ZEN room and my muse said "let's do something with that." Knowing how mean Trixie can be, I agreed fast.

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