Discarded Love

amidst sandy shore
withered rose lays discarded
from the sea of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 22, 2008 at 4:28 PM
You capture beauty in the sadness. Awesome. Love Heidie
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August 20, 2008 at 2:33 PM
A sad and lonely visual in my mind's eye. Love your play on words. Love, Shar
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