Discarded Affection

Affection ridden 
Disrespect established
Love and tender discarded
False tears and all of the fakeness
In this moment
In this calming bit of second
I hate them more than ever
My own flesh and blood
The disgrace they give
The lack of concern 
The spiteful disrespect
The blackness of one’s heart
The least of love
The covered veil of humanity 
I have set my mind
I have dealt with their wicked thoughts and tries
They team up against me
Begin to think they are right
But every action makes them darker and stupid
They are planning for a battle 
Against someone they think they know
Against someone they think is wrong
Oh warriors of the light!
Aid me, help me, Make them learn
Make them think twice
The lies they conceal 
Will make them lose all powers
They will perish 
Against me
Against the once-known for a sister

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/27/2011 1:59:00 PM
Very nice writing, This poem has really good flow. I relate to the fact that I too have brothers and sisters.. Thanks for all your support.
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Your welcome :D and Thank You for ur Kind comments :D
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Your welcome :D and Thank You for ur Kind comments :D
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 6/27/2011 5:00:00 PM
Your welcome :D and Thank You for ur Kind comments :D
Date: 5/26/2011 11:08:00 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Louzana. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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Louzana Nubani
Date: 5/31/2011 8:12:00 AM
Thank You Carol For reading My poetry and Keeping up with what i write, I really Appreciate Your kind comments and i hope your days as well to be filled with love and joy and inspiration Thank You Carol Love, Louzana
Date: 5/26/2011 6:06:00 AM
Nice!!! good one!!!
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:10:00 AM
Thank You :D
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