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Discarded

Took a bite of me.
Chewed a while and spit me out.
Left me in a mess.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 3:05 PM
Hello Lin, This sounds so sad. yu can do better. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 10:54 AM
Hello Lin, oh, i aam feeling better now. Thanl you for telling. me. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 4:49 PM
lol ~ just something that came to mind when I saw this prompt... not a page of my journal.
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