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(That Such Brilliant Gems May A Lifetime Last)

Disarray, 11/17/2019

Sponsor - Nina Parmenter
Disarray Contest

Giving my sincere thanks for this fine contest theme, that has so truly, deeply and greatly inpired me this bright and glorious new morn!

As ink into eager white paper soak

a voice from invisible realm commands

rest your old bones beneath this mighty oak

write as I, your brilliant muse demand

show this world, poet that has not forgot

that night stars are shining for a true cause

poetry oft heals soul's decaying rot

teach some to life's fast pace give needed pause.

Disarray Within huge caverns of my disarray fly interpreting birds with rainbow wings well sung arrow-shot words, vanquish the grey while they fly about, dawn's gleaming rays sing! This radiant scene, stirs a weeping heart as morn's bright colorful songbirds appear red roses preen, as throat'ed music starts I rise with glee, as joy replaces fear! Sun then speaks with oak trees swaying in tune as blue sky above more radiance casts wind tags along, its soft breeze a nice boon to harmony, as treasure ships flow past! As red sun, its resplendent array gifts tinge of sorrows, as beauty ends too fast yet such fine manna, spirit so uplifts that such brilliant gems may a lifetime last! 11/17/2019 Sponsor - Nina Parmenter Disarray Contest

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 11/19/2019 5:20:00 AM

Oh, this is my very fave. It touched something in me. It doesn't happen often. I think, I need a time to figure out what exactly.

Robert Lindley
Date: 11/19/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I am sure you will find out perhaps that what it touched is the appreciation of poetry that rests deep with your own poetic heart and soul. God bless...

Aqua Marine

Date: 11/17/2019 2:29:00 PM

Dearest Robert, this is an invigorating poem that imparts energy to the reader's mind with your vibrant word image! The first verse sets the scene for poetic disarray if the most colourful kind- wishing you the best for the contest! Warm regards, Aqua M.

Robert Lindley
Date: 11/18/2019 4:28:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Your comment is an affirmation that maybe this old poet should continue to sling ink! And thus hope for the best....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2019 1:24:00 PM

You were very well inspired to write a beautiful poem, Robert.

Robert Lindley
Date: 11/18/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I was truly inspired and also took extra time to get this one written as best as I could .

Silent One

Date: 11/17/2019 1:16:00 PM

This radiant scene, stirs a weeping heart as morn's bright colorful songbirds appear red roses preen, as throat'ed music starts I rise with glee, from pure joy they impart!.. how uplifting and what a great stanza.. great poem for this contest my friend..

Robert Lindley
Date: 11/18/2019 4:25:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I so truly appreciate your kind and insightful reply given.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/17/2019 8:53:00 AM

Positively blissful disarray Robert! My best to you my friend. xomo

Robert Lindley
Date: 11/18/2019 4:24:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I am so very pleased you like this piece.