Disappointment

With all efforts we strive
All the hard work and commitment
Till the final day arrive
Challenges after challenges
Relentless pour of difficulties
From all angles 
As a team we persevere
Overcoming each and single challenge
But then eventually to be misunderstood
A great blow to all
Yet we move on
Ignoring the criticisms
Knowing too well
That we have put in our best
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 10:23 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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January 19, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Kee Siang Lee,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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