Disappointment

The cause of the newlyweds' tiff
occurred when he told her, 'I'm stiff' -
he didn't explain
his neck was in pain
and sulking, she gave him a biff!

written 27th February for Tania's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Allison Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 6:45 PM
lol Jack you crease me up!:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:40 PM
Jack, this is very bawdy and funny, congratulations on your winning placement!
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:06 AM
HAHAHA. This is good limerick material, my friend. congrats
Alex Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Double meaning? Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Communication is the key to a successful marriage. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Hello Jack Horn, he should have explained himself to his wife. then he would be divorced.E njoy your evening my friend.
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