"Angels" have tried to help me but I far too frequently miss the point.
I’ve disappointed heaven and I can tell you why - I angered a silver angel who came down from the sky. She said, “I'm just a messenger sent to share the word.” I stood stone-still and waited and this is what I heard: “The coming Judgement will fulfil - the rightful verdict of the Lord.” “OK…” I answered, shyly - in an effort to prompt for more. But the seraphim started fading away as if the message finished her chore.. I said, “Wait! I need a message I understand - you have to give me more.” The angel's face turned angry and her tone became unkind - she flipped her hair like a mean girl and muttered “NEVERMIND”. So if you’re messaged by an angel, I hope you fare better than me - I couldn’t decipher the message - and she flew off angrily.
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