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Disappearing Moon

Disappeared? Moon on the wane - by...a shroud? just a cloud... and some rain. I know I'll see her again on this sylvan, country lane.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2025 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

David Crandall
Date: 7/19/2025 5:00:00 PM

Thanks Sara!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/17/2025 7:22:00 AM

hmm. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

David Crandall
Date: 7/19/2025 5:00:00 PM

Thanks Thriveni!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2025 10:22:00 AM

Very nice! Congrats!

David Crandall
Date: 7/16/2025 10:32:00 PM

Thanks, Kim!

Mark Toney

Date: 7/16/2025 8:29:00 AM

David, congratulations on your win in my Straight One-Rhymed Englyn poetry contest! Love the transition from the ‘disappearing moon’ to the confidence of a future reunion. Nicely done.

David Crandall
Date: 7/16/2025 10:32:00 PM

Thanks, Mark, I enjoyed your contest!

Terry Miller

Date: 7/16/2025 8:06:00 AM

Nice entry David, congratulations

David Crandall
Date: 7/16/2025 10:31:00 PM

Thanks Terry!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/15/2025 8:16:00 PM

Moon is the 'comeback celestial object' of the ages, methinks.

David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2025 6:02:00 PM

haha, true, you can't count the moon out!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/15/2025 6:46:00 PM

Dear David, your poem's imagery is just lovely.. always looking forward to seeing the moon in clear skies again, especially after a rainy night. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

David Crandall
Date: 6/15/2025 7:03:00 PM

Hi Susan - thanks. I'm glad to hear positive feedback on this one. I was afraid my first line might've been a little all over the place.