Disappearing Moon

Disappeared?  Moon on the wane - by...a shroud?
just a cloud... and some rain.
I know I'll see her again
on this sylvan, country lane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
mysore Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 7:22 AM
hmm. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Crandall Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thanks Thriveni!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Very nice! Congrats!
Crandall Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Toney Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 8:29 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my Straight One-Rhymed Englyn poetry contest! Love the transition from the ‘disappearing moon’ to the confidence of a future reunion. Nicely done.
Crandall Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Mark, I enjoyed your contest!
Miller Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 8:06 AM
Nice entry David, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:31 PM
Thanks Terry!
Wolf Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 8:16 PM
Moon is the 'comeback celestial object' of the ages, methinks.
Crandall Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:02 PM
haha, true, you can't count the moon out!
Ashley Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Dear David, your poem's imagery is just lovely.. always looking forward to seeing the moon in clear skies again, especially after a rainy night. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 7:03 PM
Hi Susan - thanks. I'm glad to hear positive feedback on this one. I was afraid my first line might've been a little all over the place.
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