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Disappearing Moon

Disappeared? Moon on the wane - by...a shroud? just a cloud... and some rain. I know I'll see her again on this sylvan, country lane.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/15/2025 8:16:00 PM

Moon is the 'comeback celestial object' of the ages, methinks.

David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2025 6:02:00 PM

haha, true, you can't count the moon out!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/15/2025 6:46:00 PM

Dear David, your poem's imagery is just lovely.. always looking forward to seeing the moon in clear skies again, especially after a rainy night. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

David Crandall
Date: 6/15/2025 7:03:00 PM

Hi Susan - thanks. I'm glad to hear positive feedback on this one. I was afraid my first line might've been a little all over the place.