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Disappearing Ink

there's a name for it erasing all these bits of me MagiCicada 13

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Date: 6/20/2018 2:51:00 PM
I love this! Did I miss something though? I hope all is well, my talented, witty poet friend
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Date: 6/20/2018 3:13:00 PM
Noo. I missed something. Well, not just me, it's newer science, Post-Concussion Syndrome, I've had it longer than there's been a name for it. I'm not leaving. I'm just coming back! Thank you Anna, xomo <3
Date: 6/20/2018 11:29:00 AM
Where have I been, my love... I do hereby promise to correct this grievous error!!! LOL Lovsies, Happy Jack XOX
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2018 1:25:00 PM
Hey, I do like you coming around to my page, it's lovely to see you. xomo ;)
Date: 6/20/2018 9:54:00 AM
Please do not disappear my friend. Your superbly crafted poetry is a treasure here. A fav...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/20/2018 1:23:00 PM
..."unintelligible humble mumble and sniff" <3
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/20/2018 10:30:00 AM
My very good friend, your style is wonderful. Your poetry shines in originality, heart and insight! I pity those that can not see this reality. The true gifts that you give us with your wondrous poems!!
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Date: 6/20/2018 10:12:00 AM
Robert, you always make me feel welcome and appreciated, I know my style's not to everybody's taste, for your openness to my whims and fancy and full acceptance of me and my writing, I thank you my friend. Keep well and keep writing xomo <3
Date: 6/19/2018 8:30:00 PM
Edgy, 'in-there out-there' gem, Maureen. :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thank you comrade xomo <3
Date: 6/19/2018 5:55:00 PM
this one is stunning. I love it, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 10:04:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, this one is special. xomo
Date: 6/19/2018 5:16:00 PM
This one is deep... I will have to give one of these a try in your honour...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 10:03:00 PM
I' be thrilled and honoured! Yeah, this one comes from a deeper spot. xomo
Date: 6/19/2018 1:58:00 PM
an intriguing write, maureen...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 9:59:00 PM
Thank you Ilene, that's sort of exactly where I'm at :) xomo
Date: 6/19/2018 12:00:00 PM
Liposuction...wait erase that....love it moxx
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 1:05:00 PM
Lol! I wouldn't waste any, just move it around some ;p
Date: 6/19/2018 11:57:00 AM
The hidden bits add some mystery. Well expressed Maureen. Hugs Rick.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Rick :) xomo
Date: 6/19/2018 11:34:00 AM
Don't disappear on us Maureen! Hugs :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/19/2018 11:44:00 AM
I'm working on it :) Thank you Heidi! xomo <3

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