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I am watching you disappear in front of me, Your arms disintegrating into paper-thin limbs. I am watching you disappear in front of me, Your eyes turning from a bright blue to a dull gray. I am watching you disappear in front of me, Your hair is now falling out and you are having violent shudders. I am watching you disappear in front of me, Your words come out weakly, your mouth can hardly form a sentence. I am watching you disappear in front of me, You have fainted twice in the past hour. I am watching you disappear in front of me, You refusing to eat causes me to hear the water falling into your empty stomach. I am watching you disappear in front of me, Concern blossoms through my chest and I find the courage to speak to someone about it. I am watching you disappear in front of me, They have taken you to a hospital now, IVs protruding through your paper-like arms. I am watching you disappear in front of me, The doctors say you are too weak to continue living, I reached out too late. I watched you disappear in front of me, Today... you stopped breathing.

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Date: 12/20/2017 11:05:00 PM
:'( such a very sad story,Ashley, but that is what society puts on our children Perfection. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/20/2017 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Ashley - blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-)
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:29:00 PM
That is very powerful and very moving. I am very sorry for your loss. Your poem is excellent.
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Ashley Beach
Date: 8/9/2017 12:24:00 AM
I appreciate you taking time to read this. Thank you.
Date: 7/9/2017 7:03:00 AM
I once wrote a poem on how my Grandmother passed away, And it always leads me to burst into crying while re-reading it. I know how you feeling while writing this poem. It just touches my heart.
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Ashley Beach
Date: 8/9/2017 12:25:00 AM
Writing about death would bring anyone to tears in my opinion. I'm sorry for your loss. I appreciate you taking time to read this.
Date: 5/20/2017 2:13:00 AM
What a very sad poem you have written. It is touching and painful.... I wish you welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Ashley Beach
Date: 5/25/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you for welcoming me, Darren. And I will admit myself, it hurt me to write this poem. Thank you for commenting.

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